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Which comment was that? I’m intrigued! 🙂

I was rambling about Darla as follows:

3) I know that I really wish we had more interaction between Darla and Buffy. I know that it would turn into a love triangle and people aren't usually into that -- whatever, but honestly the parallels between Buffy and Darla are so good that I would have liked to see at least one episode (besides the Season 1 Darla stuff which is fine but lets face it was underdeveloped) where we really see AtS Darla and Buffy interacting.

I can see this happening a few ways:

Buffy in Reunion, being called in to help with Darla/Drusilla. Darla and Buffy have a confrontation. I almost like this happening with Angel no where near them. Both of them talking to each other about how they understand Angel. I think their view points on him are so starkly different. They both think they know Angel better than the other, but maybe they know different sides of him.

Or I would like a post Epiphany Darla, pissed because she wasn't enough to make Angel lose his soul confront Buffy. Again - I think the conversation would be interesting. Darla intrigued by Buffy what makes her so special. Maybe Darla goes over to Buffy, abducts her and just asks her questions, and they compare notes so to speak. But then Angel goes and helps Buffy when Darla tries to kill Buffy.

The last idea that I had was a pregnant Darla, pissed and hormonal finding a depressed Buffy. I just think those two characters would be a hoot. Darla finds out that Buffy is sleeping with Spike (not sure if the timing would fit necessarily but I think it would) and finds it hilarious, using it to continue to drive a wedge between her and Angel, and adding to Buffy's depression. And I would like to see Buffy actually protect Darla because she is carrying Angel's baby, despite her hate for the woman.
 
Just read Prom by @dcai0830

Cute little fic! I especially loved the part about Buffy being a bad driver and Angel and his love for Barry Manilow. Oh and it being Cordy's yearbook was a nice touch! And I loved that Buffy, was still extremely happy, still felt emotional about that time of her life. It felt very real and relatable.

Also, bonus points for the part about Romeo and Juliet. 🙂
 
Mrs Gordo
Mrs Gordo
Thanks for reading Mylie :)
Just read "Stronger Together" It was an impressive bit of writing and I really enjoyed reading it @Taaroko. It made so much more sense for it to all have gone down that way on both shows instead of the way the writers for the show did it. Your writing is excellent and I hope you have the time to keep writing them. I abandoned the other ones just because I got so busy that I didn't have time to read them and I have been busy making my gifts and now I am under the gun to get them finished,since I put off making them. That is on me, of course. I hope they will be available for me to read after Christmas when I have more time to read them.
 
Catching up on some of these, I don't have much feedback but here are some random thoughts:

I Pray for Half an Hour by WillowFromBuffy - Nice piece. I giggled a little picturing Dru cradling a dead puppy...good detail!

Dearest Demon by xspike4evax - very good read overall, thinking about what comes next was heartbreaking.

Keep Going by Mrs.Gordo - Loved the Spike = lieutenant whereas Angel = equal bit. The Cordy/Angel interaction was amazing and spot on in terms of capturing their dynamic. I thought you did a very fair and realistic job of writing Spike, Buffy, and Angel true to the characters created. I haven't read a lot of fanfiction but this is one of my favorites.

Conversations on Rooftops by Mrs. Gordo - Loved reading Faith. You got the Buffy and Faith love/hate jealousy thing down good. Faiths smirk at seeing B jealous...so on point. Fun read.
 
Keep Going by Mrs.Gordo - Loved the Spike = lieutenant whereas Angel = equal bit. The Cordy/Angel interaction was amazing and spot on in terms of capturing their dynamic. I thought you did a very fair and realistic job of writing Spike, Buffy, and Angel true to the characters created. I haven't read a lot of fanfiction but this is one of my favorites.

Conversations on Rooftops by Mrs. Gordo - Loved reading Faith. You got the Buffy and Faith love/hate jealousy thing down good. Faiths smirk at seeing B jealous...so on point. Fun read.

Thanks for your feedback! 🙂 I'm glad to hear that you thought I did a good job with Cordy and Spike especially, I find it hard to get into that head space and channel those characters.
 
I just read Stronger Together by @Taaroko (finally!).

It's the longest fanfic I've read (I'm used to reading 1 chapter fanfics) and I enjoyed it from start to finish!

I loved the way it was set in canon, all the little elements like Buffy struggling to say "I love you" and worrying about becoming cold, the bit about "Death is your gift / When you kiss me I want to die", all good stuff!

The Angel/Dawn stuff was gold!! It made me smile a lot and I feel like it was true to the characters.

I really loved the writing and I was able to imagine the characters in my head. It was also pretty cathartic to read 🙂
 
I just read Stronger Together by @Taaroko (finally!).

It's the longest fanfic I've read (I'm used to reading 1 chapter fanfics) and I enjoyed it from start to finish!

I loved the way it was set in canon, all the little elements like Buffy struggling to say "I love you" and worrying about becoming cold, the bit about "Death is your gift / When you kiss me I want to die", all good stuff!

The Angel/Dawn stuff was gold!! It made me smile a lot and I feel like it was true to the characters.

I really loved the writing and I was able to imagine the characters in my head. It was also pretty cathartic to read 🙂

I'm honored to have written the longest fanfic you've read! 😛 One of my top goals is always to have my fanfics be as seamless with canon as possible. I try never to change anything arbitrarily; something about the circumstances will change, but the characters will continue to be themselves. I've gotten some fascinating snowball effects that way. I'm glad you liked the Angel/Dawn stuff. I feel like that was one of the elements most open to interpretation.
 
I'm honored to have written the longest fanfic you've read! 😛 One of my top goals is always to have my fanfics be as seamless with canon as possible. I try never to change anything arbitrarily; something about the circumstances will change, but the characters will continue to be themselves. I've gotten some fascinating snowball effects that way. I'm glad you liked the Angel/Dawn stuff. I feel like that was one of the elements most open to interpretation.

Because I'm feeling like reading more fanfiction now, I'm looking at the Sunnydale Fanfic Club episodes and I noticed that there's an episode on one of your fics so I'm excited to read more and than finally start that podcast. I also realized I never did get around to listening to @Grace 's episode on Another Minute so I'm really excited!!!
 
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